10 January 2014

An Eye for an Eye… A world for a world




There she goes….a woman with a purpose. She had been preparing for this moment from eons…preparing, wondering, dreaming, fearing about it through millennia after millennia …but strangely when the time arrived, she was unexpectedly calm…maybe the calm before the storm? She was walking…no, gliding across the huge ocean with a single minded determination. Her mission was about to begin. She felt no emotion attached with what was entrusted to her by the highest authority of all.
She had watched the earth change…only she could see it among all the creatures inhibiting the one of a kind heavenly body-the humans christened Earth. She could because you need to be there for a very long time to see the change as the rate of change is immeasurably small for the pitiful life span of any living creature on the planet.
    She had observed the earth change for the worse and knew that the time was near. She had wondered all along about the unjust the entire system of life had to undergo because of a single selfish species– the Homo sapiens.
    This event was mentioned in the ancient and the first language of civilization. There was already a record of the coming events in this ancient literature though it was yet to happen! This surprised her more than anything…Perhaps the human race was more perspective than she gave them credit for.. maybe they would fare better in the next phase of time? Time will tell.
    She had hoped that the prophecy be wrong. She had hoped that mankind would slow down, stop and eventually return from the doom towards which they were heading. But it was not to be. The events unfolding were so precise, a non believer would have said that the events had happened first and the “prophecy” written later ..
    Mankind…what a strange word ..they should have been called ManUnkind. Observing them through time immemorial, she had watched with horror as they degenerated to the current state. The world in its current stage held no new borns, no infants, no toddlers, no adolescents, no teens and no elderly.

The average life span of a human was 30 years. Natural Procreation was absent. The only way of creating offsprings was to clone oneself, which only the rich could afford and many of them were not the least bit interested in creating a new life. So this was a rarity, hence population was alarming dwindling. As for the clones, they were created with their physical state equivalent to a 20 year old and had all the knowledge, mannerisms, fetish, etc…of their creators. So, life in a nutshell was: born as a 20 year old and have a life for 10 years. 
    When things reached this state, she knew that what needed to be done was to be done. And done be her alone. Her resolve hardened.
    She had reached the destined location. Now she had to summon the elements to her will, which was what she was born to do. This would be the final phase of time. Everything would go back as it was before time was time and she played the pivotal role in this. It was as written that this phase would be the worst of all and when evil reached it’s peak…then would be the time for her to act…it would be the End-of –the-world. Or she preferred to think of it as a “cleansing” rather than the end of something.
    She closes her mind on all trivial things she was thinking until this moment and loses herself completely to focus on the point she stands and starts to manipulate environmental factors so that they disobey the laws of physics…and so..it begins…
    A lighting flash so dazzling, it should have blinded her but doesn’t,  lights up the entire sky…and as if guided by her…concentrates into a line of brilliance and lands directly at her feet.
    An colossal wave raises from the point and splits into four …each travelling towards a different direction.. each second growing larger…the sky turns a frightening black..it’s as if the sun has disappeared!…She knows once the waves hit the shores, they will not stop there…they will continue their journey till the four mighty waves meet again and reunite… engulfing all in there path. They could do that because they weren’t just monstrous waves..they had the power of antimatter infused in them… ….thus giving them the power to annihilate everything… marine life, airborne creatures and land dwellers… It was a matter a few minutes and it was all over. She levitates to a much higher position and watches the new world sans any form of life.. she watches it with awe…the world she helped create….It all seemed so fast…her purpose is served. The moment she realizes this, another brilliant flash of light hits her directly and she vaporizes…becoming a single celled organism…  the only life form on the planet..the foundation of evolution to come.

9 comments:

Unknown said...

Just as i was thinking maybe i can find a pattern, You had to take this one through a totally different tangent didn't you.

Yet another story where i failed as a natural critic. Excellent piece of work. I like especially how this one is from a third person's view and the description of the events... Very Impressive!!

Looking forward to see more of the stories. Always a pleasure reading them.

Girish Maiya said...

Creative writing at it's best. Ability to think beyond one's age is demonstrated in this story. References to kaliyuga and visualization aspects stand out.

I can see that you have reached a position to move from short stories to novel. Hoping that transition is planed.

Keep up the good work

Vinay said...

Great piece of writing.. you writing this coz of the global warming or you getting spiritual?... and me being me, I have to wonder.. if the waves were anti matter and they circled through out, by the end of it there will nothing left.. no? (wears a detective hat and starts thinking)

Medini said...

Hello my vampire friend :)
global warming? nah! spiritual? maybe... :)
yeah...by definition antimatter should destroy matter...meaning everything...but she controls it for selective destruction...of only life not all matter...makes sense? i should have called it antilife but that somehow doesn't sound good..

Naga said...

The concept was simply superb. I like the wording of story, it’s really very nice and like a professional writer. Moreover for some of the words I had gone through the dictionary. After reading this I think you can start writing of a novel instead of these time pass stories. It’s really impressed me and we can send it to magazines and dailies.
Congrats Medini and waiting for your novel …..All De Best 

Regards,
Naga.

Mohan Kothandaraman said...

Gripping story line.. The visualization of the last scene by a big hollywood production house would be very nice watch..

Anonymous said...

Hey Medini. As I was reading this I was feeling slightly jealous about not being able to conceptualize such settings. A wave that splits into four and engulfs the civilization? Wow!- Sara

Anonymous said...

Conceptualisation is quite original. The crescendo of content accumulation is well thought-out. The conjuring of the word "ManUnkind" is very imaginative and ,in my opinion, is a reflection of the present state of the world. The non believer's interpretation of the prophecy is too good, and is a typical reaction from that clan in all times.

Well sis..., I really enjoyed reading it.Keep up the good work.


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pavvis said...

Hmm ... four waves of 'Anti Matter' , later a fresh start as a single cell. Thanks for reminding that we are from the same Piece of excellence :) 'ekamevadwiteeyam' !!!!

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