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This one was my entry for Deccan Herald's Short Story Contest 2017. The results are out....Didn't make it to the top 3..Hence thought I'll post it here...I'm planning to give it a shot every year though...all thanks to my friend Sara for motivating me :) Hope you guys like it!
This one was my entry for Deccan Herald's Short Story Contest 2017. The results are out....Didn't make it to the top 3..Hence thought I'll post it here...I'm planning to give it a shot every year though...all thanks to my friend Sara for motivating me :) Hope you guys like it!
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I look at him with pity. I am not allowed to feel anything.
I am supposed to carry out the sentence, which I definitely will. But I cannot
stop myself from feeling sorry for the whole situation, for him, for me. He
looks right into my eyes and I can see disappointment in his…not fear, which
has me stunned as I am used to seeing fear in the eyes at the other end of the weapon.
My eyes fill with tears when I point the laser to this temple and I give an
involuntary shout of helplessness when I pull the trigger at point blank range…..
The year is 6100 AD. The location is Asia Major. The name is
AS3ZOD1F76070. The occupation is Arbitrator. The emotional quotient Zero. The
social Order is Elite.
Let me elaborate the above paragraph:
Yes. This is set in the future. Around four thousand years
from your time. A time where everything is synthetic and artificial. Morals and
Values changed drastically. We are fearful of letting go of this lifestyle, the
one that is most harmful yet the one we are most comfortable with.
The geopolitical locations are divided based on the
continents. The concept of countries, states etc..is long gone
What’s with the weird name you say? Well.. I feel your old
fashioned names are really weird as they do not follow any format nor serve any
purpose other than identifying oneself. Though I feel it fails in that singular
aspect as well. Your name would not communicate anything to me save for the
fact that it was chosen by your sires according to their fancy. Mine for
example would immediately let the listener know that I am born in Asia, am a
female, have a DNA code starting with Z indicating my Genes are one of the
healthiest, undergone 7 medical procedures at birth (which is extremely rare as
the usual ‘at birth procedures’ that one goes through will usually be around
250) , age 30 Earth Years
Who is an Arbitrator? An individual with the highest
authority which cannot be questioned by anyone but another Arbitrator of the
same ranking. He/ She has the authority to arrest, forgive, judge, condemn and
execute anybody. A Policeman, a Prosecutor, a Defendant, a Jury, a Judge and an
executor, all rolled into one and would pass the sentence at any point of time,
right at the place of crime or confrontation
What is an emotional Quotient? Well, unlike your times, where
IQ was the one sufficient to land you a Job, in our times, IQ is just a
preliminary. One’s EQ score would dictate the role one played in the society. Higher
the role, lesser should be the EQ. With mine being the least 0.1% in the populace,
I was selected to be an Arbitrator and since I am ranked in the top 1% bracket
of Arbitrators, I am of the elite Arbitrator class. I am never emotional on the
job but who would have guessed that I would be bawling like a newborn after I
encounter him.
We Arbitrators are there to eliminate threats to our
society. That is our foremost goal. Any person who poses as a threat to our way
of life needs to be eliminated. Because we are nothing without our way of life.
It was just another day of duty. Policed a few petty
criminals, judged them for 2 years hard labor. Had caught a would-be drugs
peddler. Since he was a minor, judged him into juvenile institution. Thwarted a
Kidnapping attempt, found him guilty of a series of crimes in the past as well.
Decided he is harmful to the society and executed him as a result of my
verdict.
Little did I realize my world would be turned upside down in
a few moments. I was doing a routine patrol in Area 54 which was a bit too
deserted for my liking. It just spelled ‘trouble’. I was alert for any danger
as I rounded a corner and came face to face with a person I’ll never forget in
my life.
Instinct had me reaching for my gun and in a split second, I
had the barrel pointing to his face. He just looked at me in a disinterested
sort of way. I braked “Announce yourself suspect!”
He deadpanned ‘Sebastian Lorde’. I glared at him and snapped
“The next joke will cost you your life!” He just stood there.
I decided to take matters into my own hands and pulled out
the scanner. This device would tell me a lot about the individual it is pointed
at. When I got the readings, I was dumbstruck! The readings cannot be true!!
Was my scanner faulty? Or was this person somehow …??
Let me elaborate, in another 500 years from your time, due
to a lot of factors, a naturally healthy child is non-existent and by our time,
a child at birth would have a lot of inadequacies. A child is always born with
defects such as missing limbs, missing fingers, missing ears, etc.. Hence, a
lot of medical procedures after birth is a must. I was a rarity where fewer
procedures were required. But I too had two limbs missing. We have advanced so
much medically, that artificial limbs could be implanted that would grow as
your body grows. There were no births recorded wherein the baby had all the
limbs. Also, the maximum life expectancy of a human being in my time is 50
Earth years, the average being 40 Earth years.
What had me flabbergasted was that according to my scanner,
the man in front of me had no artificial limbs! He was born perfect which can
never be! This had not happened for centuries and the only recorded baby who
was born without any defects was in the year 3100 AD and now that I think back
to my history lesson, his name was Sebastian too!!. Also, another stunning fact
was that my faithful scanner was announcing to me that the person was 62 years
old! He didn’t look a day over 30!
I watch him and he just nods his head. I still do not relax
my stance. I just whisper ‘How?’ to him.
He takes a deep breath and tells me that the enemy I
perceive isn’t the real enemy. This sentence
shakes me to my very core! I almost lose my grip on my gun. Almost, but I
don’t. I am shaken because those were the words my father said to me before
succumbing to an Arbitrator’s bullet.
Yes. He was shot before my own eyes. Why? They said he was
conspiring against the government. My mind is on overdrive! I’m trying to
connect the pieces.. I am vaguely arriving at a point of realization! Maybe
these so called conspirators are naturalists defying the current way of life! Maybe
dad was one too! Maybe I should be one too! But before I can come to a
conclusion, I receive a directive…
I get a command on my earpiece and a visual identifying the
person in front of me as a war criminal. I need to execute him right away as
that’s the only sentence for war criminals. I know that it’s a false accusation
made on him and is intended to eliminate him but I cannot go against our
judiciary. I have a million unanswered questions but I steel myself and grip my
gun harder…..
7 comments:
Thanks for the mention �� As I have already told you, this story and the setting is way beyond the boundaries of my own imagination. I never thought that one could coneceptualize humans born after thousands of years. Probably I always believed that the world would end before that! �� Kudos to you!
-Sara
Excellent, can't wait for the future...hahaha...keep the stories coming...Arun
Very well written. Nicely crafted. The story telling is gripping despite being linear.
Rating: 5 Stars
This story is gripping to explore the depth you have envisaged.Well written with good imagination Medini. Good one.
BR,
Ravishankar Sukumar
Told u many times...you have strong fantasies created on futuristic life :) . And I got the inner line "there is no place for human emotions in future" . Keep these stories coming ...may be we can send to Hollywood ��. Good read.
Hi Medini, I love this story. Concise and powerful! I suggest you watch the film "Ghost in the Shell". http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0113568/ It deals with fantastic concepts. We can talk about it after the next poetry meet. :)
Thanks Siddartha :)
I will definitely watch the suggested movie before we meet again! If there's one thing I enjoy more than watching a good movie, its discussing about it with like minded individuals :)
Cheers!
Medini
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